Last week,
i accidentally read an essay which was written by a year6 student
after reading,
i astounded as it was too lousy to make me believe dat essay is come from a year6 student.
oh,
he really needs to work hard
or else
i wonder how he could pass the chinese test in UPSR.
the essay is shown below: (dun laugh)
上个星期六,爸爸情了一位蓝球教炼来叫我打蓝球,因为我家的蓝球快“生”灰成了。
蓝球教炼叫可比。他叫我叫他可教炼。他带我到蓝球场炼习。首先,可教炼教我炼拍球,
他叫我拍一百下。我听到拍一百下,很惊讶,但我还是要拍,因为爸爸花了不少钱请可
教炼。
接着,可教炼在教我炼戴球,还要我戴时,半路不要把球拍太高,因为很容易给对方
偷走。还叫我戴球几次来回蓝球场。
戴完后,可教炼教我休息几分钟。当我休息时,我想放汽。突然可教炼走过来教我不要
放汽,因为打蓝球可以锻炼身体,还可以带表国家出国比赛,增加国家名字。
我听了后,就姐定不放汽。然后可教炼教我上蓝,房手等。到了5:00,我便回家。我
很开心,因为学会了打蓝球。
*italic -sentence /structure error
*bold -word usage mistakes
today.. i still need to wake up early though it is weekend
mid year exam will be held on next wednesday
so?
are u well -prepared?
the ans is obviously NO!!
so how?
the 1st day will be test BIO and calculus( i really wonder to know why the 1st day isnt BM test)
i think i am a bit lazy this year (dunno why? i wonder. )
i wonder why i would choose the science stream ( no only me but also most of the science students)..
PHYSICS & APPLIED MATH(my weakness!!)
( tell u a joke-- i m the president of the physics society.... omg..)
whoelse can teach me? ( i think it is futile at all)
haiz..
stop grumbling now..
or esle i will craze for the exam..
=.=